I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, May 26, 2016
Adding With Decimals
Labels:
Maths,
Term 2 2016,
W.A.L.T:Adding with decimals.
Friday, May 20, 2016
The Calf's Un Lucky Day
Term 2 Week 3
W.A.L.T recall events through the eyes of an animal.
Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when my recount has a
- Title
- Orientation: When? Who? Where? Why?
- Sequence of events: What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see, smell and feel).
- Personal Comment: How did the events make you feel.
(First Draft)
The Calf's Un Lucky Day
It was a lovely day in the African Savannah. I was just chilling because we got bored with my herd I was the smallest in the herd because I am just a calf after all. The head of my herd is my uncle so I feel protected with him. It is early July just about my one year birthday. Don Don Don…
Me and my herd were walking on the river bank eating some grass.I smell fear in the air. I heard my uncle shout run for your live so we did as I could see a pride of lions. They chased after me and I was tackled into the river bad luck. No i shouted. This is not the birthday I was hoping. I feel like a rope being used in a game of tug a war. I was a rope between a crocodile and a pride of lions in tuggawar. But the 2 buffaloes went and got the whole herd and scared away the lions and I have been rescued yay I thought I was going to die. I didn't want my birthday to be the day I die. And we went home and lived happily ever after.
Now I am safe Thanks to my family/Herd now we went home and had some fish, chips and all my crying has paid off hopefully I don't have to face them again in my life or it happens to my calf in a few years time and we lived happily ever after.
Labels:
Battle at Kruger park story,
First-Draft.,
Recunt,
Term 2 2016,
writing
Friday, May 6, 2016
My Animal Creation
Learelphteater
Learelphteater eats Meat.
Head: Lion
Learelphteater has good sense of smell
Body: Polar Bear
Learelphteater They can survive for long periods of time without food or water.
Legs: Elephant
Learelphteater stand 3.4 metres high.
Tail: Giant Anteater
Learelphteater Has the ability to swim.
Battle Of Kruger National Park Sequence
W.A.L.T Recall events in order
The herd of buffalo's are walking by the river bank.
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The pride of lion are relaxing.
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The lions are getting to pounce on the buffalo's.
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The pride of lions have pounced they are after the buffalo's.
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The pride of lions have pounced they are after the buffalo's.
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The lions have caught the buffalo calf.
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The 2 big buffalo's went to get a herd of buffalo's.
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The calf has been rescued.
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The buffaloes are chasing away the lions.
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Labels:
Battle Of Kruger National Park,
Recount,
Sequence,
Term 2 2016,
writing
Monday, May 2, 2016
Life In The Trenches.
W.A.L.T describe what life was like for men and women in WW1 through a diary entry.
24th July 1915
It is not the grand adventure I was promised. I am digging trenches it is not like the journey they told me it was going to be this is so tiring it is not like a garden it is full of concrete they are liars why was I so dumb to believe them I am getting sick of rat bites. Tomorrow it is my turn to charge out of my trench I have absolutely no chance of getting out of here alive this is not what i signed up for what dumb commanders why did I believe them all that hard work for nothing. Some people died because of trench foot but some got their foot cut off. The commander always send people over but it was useless they would keep on dying but i knew if you didn't go over they would execute you or shoot you. But i would rather risk my life fighting for my country then living with lice, flies and rats. It was even hard to sleep because of guns shooting and bombs blowing up. And there was always a sniper shooting us when we are going to go over the top. I knew that we will go over the top next but if I don’t I will die I was scared I didn’t want to go over but I had to but they said don’t be scared just fight for your country.
Labels:
Anzac Day,
Life in the trenches,
Recount,
writing,
WW1
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