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Thursday, June 20, 2019

Writing First Draft

Writing First draft
Once upon a time there was a man named  Jaxon on a private jet and then he ran out of gas luckily he had a parachute and he landed in the desert on the island of australia.   
Lucky I went Scouts as a kid and learnt a lot of survival and the bush and camping skills.

He thought how am I going to survive with a gun a lighter a axe a tarpaulin a sleeping bag a pot and paper then the thought I can cut a tree down and make a fire and a mini house.  

With my gun I could shoot a kangaroo, skin it, cook it and eat kangaroo then I went for a walk with my axe knife and gun and I found some plants like carrots and potatoes and make a good meal with the kangaroo as it got dark i went back and built my little cabin out of wood and a tarpaulin so I got started and made a mini house and went to sleep ZZz

I woke up and it was bright and sunny so I started my day with a potato a carrot and some kangaroo it was so delicious so then I got started with the potato and carrot seeds and planted them and then went hunting or I would run out of kangaroo then would have no meet to eat so.

Off I went off and got 2 kangaroo and stored them in my house they the I saw a camel so I tamed it and now the camel is my way of getting around to go hunting and get resources. As I thought only if I had reception I could ring someone but the as I thought I said to myself why would I do that this is fun in the wild.  And this bring back memories from when I was a kid or I would be dead. Is that a helicopter are they doing a search yay I think they see me they are coming down to pick me up. I am gonna miss being here in the wild it was fun and off i went to Gold Coast Australia We made it to Gold Coast this place is so cool and the tall building like Q1 it is 100 stories high it's so cool if i remember right my uncle Barrie I'm gonna go to the food court and get some food so i go to get poppa jacks I think I see my my uncle Barrie and Aunty Teresa And my 2 cousins Oriana, Briana I run to him and say hi uncle he says are you Murray's son I said yes Im jaxon And i went back to there house lucky they have a sleepout now I have somewhere to stay yay and life went on Happily Ever After...The End

2 comments:

  1. your good at writing good job and well done

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  2. Hi nice work Jaxon I like how you put a lot of details

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