I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Spectacular work Jaxon. Your Mindmup looks good you have lots of great metaphors and similes, By the way you have two of the same metaphors, and metaphors are spelt in correctly you could also add a bit more colours. But other than that its awesome.
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Spectacular work Jaxon. Your Mindmup looks good you have lots of great metaphors and similes, By the way you have two of the same metaphors, and metaphors are spelt in correctly you could also add a bit more colours. But other than that its awesome.
ReplyDeleteWow jaxon i like your work and can you comment on my blog please....
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