I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Well done jaxon I like how you put up an early notice about your trick shot movie I can not wait till you have finished it. I think you need to change the Ariel of your writing because I can't really read it but overall I like how you did that.
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Well done jaxon I like how you put up an early notice about your trick shot movie I can not wait till you have finished it. I think you need to change the Ariel of your writing because I can't really read it but overall I like how you did that.
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