I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Well done Jaxon! I like how you said " But my why is unstoppable". For your title it says, This is a story about lies i have heard about me and i have written a poem about them. But you put a little i nisted of a capital I. But keep your good work up. By: Siola
Comments Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Well done Jaxon! I like how you said " But my why is unstoppable". For your title it says, This is a story about lies i have heard about me and i have written a poem about them. But you put a little i nisted of a capital I. But keep your good work up.
ReplyDeleteBy: Siola