I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi my name is Saxon and from yaldhurst model school and I really liked your speech about the Bermuda Triangle, It's quite interesting. When I learnt about the Bermuda Triangle I got scared because if I passed it I would be lost forever. So I think your speech was real cool but you spelt speech wrong. Four weeks! That is a long time to write a speech, when did you get the time to write it?
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Hi my name is Saxon and from yaldhurst model school and I really liked your speech about the Bermuda Triangle, It's quite interesting. When I learnt about the Bermuda Triangle I got scared because if I passed it I would be lost forever. So I think your speech was real cool but you spelt speech wrong. Four weeks! That is a long time to write a speech, when did you get the time to write it?
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